Very beautiful picture! I especially like how you painted Harry's hand and the apple. And I can't say often enough how much I love the way you paint Severus. And I also like how Harry looks like and the beautiful colours in this picture.
It's beautifully done--I love the crispness of the colors. I have to go a reread the fic now; I can't remember if this is an actual scene? But if it isn't, it certainly captures the spirit of the fic, Harry holding out something Severus wants but isn't sure if he should really want it.